Thank you all for attending this
forum. My name is Ben Pfeiffer, and it falls to me now to phrase the rhetorical
question we will be answering, or maybe dodging, during this discussion: What
is writing? The question at first seems simple, then rapidly becomes complex.
Maybe this complexity is one reason for the pressing need to classify, label,
and otherwise stunt dialogue. We fear that writing would remain unconquerable
without the walls we have built, the theories we hold up as gospel, and the
gods and idols we worship. Yet to truly understand the act we love, we must
tear down the façade. To paraphrase John Gardner, Let total war be declared
between those age-old enemies, the Real and the Fake.
This panel is concerned with a
hypothesis: Writing is an Art. My personal concern is that, in teaching
writing, we too often teach the logic of argument and not the craft of writing,
which contains the soul of the discipline. We created a specialty called Composition and filled it with Compositionists as opposed to Writers, effectively distancing
ourselves from an ancient tradition including Homer and Hemingway. We did it
for respect and funding at the university level. We did it because we're lazy.
Also we did it as a defense mechanism, an excuse that we don't play our game on
the same field as Cormac McCarthy and Chrétien de Troyes.
I am not suggesting that Art and
Science are at odds. Quite the opposite. I am suggesting that writing
professors teach--through accident and convenience--reprobic (or false) writing. What is false writing? In my mind, this reprobic
writing is related to Richard A. Lanham's "Official Style," which he denounces
so forcefully in Revising Prose.
Worse than just weak verbs, convoluted thinking, and strings of prepositional
phrases, reprobic writing is utterly, and contemptuously, worthless. It may
even harm a student's ability to use more powerful intelligences.
In On Moral Art, John Gardner writes that criticism, at its best, is
similar to art, and that the successful critic "makes up stories about
stories." However, he worries that criticism had become filled with nonsense words
like hermeneutic, heuristic, structuralism, formalism,
and so on (not unlike how discussions of "composition" have become dominated by
distinctions between Reader- and Writer-based prose, Cognitivists, Expressivists, Social Constructivists, etc.). He argues--"by reason and by banging
the table"--for an old-fashioned view of art that condemns the hollow, the
tinny, and the academic. Why should we be concerned with Gardner? He describes,
on page 8, the kind of writing compositionists often teach, although I have
modified the passage, substituting "reprobic writing" for "criticism":
Depending as it does on logic and scheme, on arguments well argued,
[reprobic writing] uses parts of the mind more readily available to us than are
the faculties required for art. And since the tests of [reprobic writing] are
completeness and coherence, whereas art's validity can only be tested by an
imaginative act on the reader's part, [reprobic writing] is easier to read [and
to grade]; that is, it does not require the involvement of as many faculties of
the mind.
In his introduction to What is Art?, translator W. Gareth Jones
admits that Lev Tolstoy's iconoclastic attack on aestheticism inflicted minimal
damage beyond the Iron Curtain. The book--published for the first time as an
uncensored volume in 1898--was dismissed by critics and admirers as the senile ranting of a 70 year-old literary giant. The
text is self-contradictory, as well: Tolstoy uses the tools he condemns, the
"craft" of writing, to make his case for True Art. If the text has one great
failing, this is it: Tolstoy's inability to recognize the subtle and enormous
differences between Shamans and Charlatans. Again, real and fake. The important
difference between Shamans and Charlatans is this: Both know how to manipulate the craft beneath Art to convince people
of their message; Charlatans do it for selfish reasons; Shamans do it for
the greater good. If rhetoric is the counterpart of cookery, then both
shamans and charlatans know how to cook. The difference, as Gary Zukav once
told me, is intention. Magicians use sleight of hand to make us believe
in magic; pickpockets use the same techniques to steal our wallets. Think also
of the Rev. Martin Luther King, Jr. and the Rev. Ted Haggard. I
believe that, in his intention, Lev Tolstoy was a shaman.
Yet Tolstoy also subverted concepts
that we struggle with today. First he preached the importance of art's
"infection," a feature of both J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series and Dan
Brown's The Da Vinci Code. Malcolm
Gladwell wrote extensively about the mechanics of infection (as it refers to
culture) in his book The Tipping Point.
Second Tolstoy preaches the importance of "awareness" and "love," although he
dresses his conversation in the religious robes and cloaks of his time. Third,
and most importantly, Tolstoy recognizes and celebrates the relationship
between science and art.
The transmission by some people to others of
what people know by proof and reasoning; the arts transmit this by awakening in
the other emotions which the transmitter experiences. Both are essential for
humanity because if there were no sciences or arts people would live like
animals, in no way differing from them.
It may be argued convincingly that
defining Writing as Art is also a political move. I do not deny it. As a writer
myself, I have a personal stake in how writing is perceived at the university,
in the community, and around the world. What matters most is that students
learn to write. English Departments seem to me to be broken mirrors in need of
repair and even unity. Technical, creative, composition, and literature classes
should celebrate their similarities instead of picking apart their petty
differences. Bickering ultimately harms the students. Rather than denounce my
stake as political posturing, I would urge you first to listen with an open mind
as we argue--by banging the table and, as Douglas Adams once suggested, with
enough controversy to provoke an outburst of chair-throwing at the end--for the
ancient view of Writing as Art; and for Art as a way of seeing.



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