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Politics & Writing

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"I do not follow the fashions in politics, letters, religion, etc..." Ernest Hemingway wrote to Paul Romaine in 1932. "If the boys swing to the left in literature you may make a small bet the next swing will be to the right and some of the same yellow bastards will swing both ways. There is no left and right in writing. There is only good and bad writing.... I'm no goddamned patriot nor will I swing to left or right."

Hemingway was notorious for his dislike of politics. His ideas stemmed from concern, of course, about a lack of understanding on either side of a political debate.

"Books should be about the people you know, that you love and hate, not about the people you study about. If you write them truly they will have all the economic implications a book can hold.... Read another book called War & Peace by Tolstoi and see how you will have to skip the big Political Thought passages, that he undoubtedly thought were the best things in the book when he wrote it, because they are no longer either true or important, if they ever were more topical, and see how true and lasting and important the people and the action are. Do not let them deceive you about what a book should be because of what is in fashion now."

That said, I politely agree, since politics is all wrapped up (especially today) in hurt feelings and resentment and misunderstanding. The lack of give and take in American political dialogue is frightening. But how much of this is true. Hemingway's own writing, including his epic novel For Whom the Bell Tolls, echoes through with political implications.

America was founded on politics and on politics it continues forward, through corruption, disillusionment, disappointment, hope, triumph, and redemption. In fact, if the mindfulness of fiction and poetry were brought to the political arena (as in Robert Penn Warren's All the King's Men), perhaps our political system would not suffer, but would be reformed.

The trick, I think, is in choosing a subject of politics and then draining the prose of idealogical bullshit, talking points, lies, and other distortions. If one writes about politics and "gives everyone an even shake," as Hemingway liked to say, even the people he or she despises the most, then  two sides might reach some kind of understanding. Dialogue implies give and take on both sides and not just shouting of positions. As Jon Stewart once pointed out, shows like the canceled Crossfire are not honest debate. They are partisan hackery. If you have time, you can watch Jon Stewart scold the hosts of Crossfire below, shortly before the show was canceled forever.


On Becoming a Novelist

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Like other kinds of intelligence, the storyteller's is partly natural, partly trained. It is composed of several qualities, most of which, in normal people, are signs of either immaturity or incivility: wit, (a tendency to make irreverent connections); obstinacy and a tendency towards churlishness (a refusal to believe what all sensible people know is true); childishness (an apparent lack of mental focus and serious life purpose, a fondness for daydreaming and telling pointless lies, a lack of proper respect, mischievousness, and unseemly propensity for crying over nothing); remarkable powers of eidetic recall, or visual memory (a usual feature of early adolescence and mental retardation); a strange admixture of shameless playfulness and embarrassing earnestness, the latter often heightened by irrationally intense feelings for or against religion; patience like a cat's; a criminal streak of cunning; psychological instability; recklessness, impulsiveness, and improvidence; and finally, an inexplicable and incurable addiction to stories, written or oral, bad or good. Not all writers have exactly these same virtues, of course. Occasionally one finds one who is not abnormally improvident.

John Gardner
On Becoming a Novelist

Torque

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"You have to say 'this is what I intend; this is what I will do if the universe is willing for me to do it.' So an intention is not a wish, and it is not a hope, it is the conscious use of your will." ~Gary Zukav

The words above are taken from what Gary Zukav told me when I asked him how people achieve fame. First, he taught me an important lesson. Being famous, he said, is not important. Not in the slightest. Being a positive influence in the world is important. Then if the universe wants you to be famous it will make you famous.

At the time I didn't know if I believed him. I was 17 years old. Mind you this was years before Oprah popularized The Secret, although she was friends with Mr. Zukav. For years motivational speakers have espoused the benefits of positive thinking. Mind over matter. Intention. But is any of it true? Although I deplore that some would capitalize on it as self-help authors and self-appointed gurus, I have come to believe it is true.

Years later, when I revisited the interview, I began to understand what Gary Zukav meant. This is what people speak of when they talk about the Law of Attraction, or about things seeming 'meant to be.'

Almost everyone I know can think of a time when things started to fall into place. When the pins and tumblers clicked and the locks opened. When things were going right. I would wager everyone who reads this can think of some time like that, and, probably, the feeling of rightness will be coupled with extraordinary coincidences.

It isn't magic. It is what it is. And, as Alexander Pope said, "What is, is right."

Many people don't believe in the law of attraction, even though they succeed by it. There is no need to. The universe doesn't care whether or not you believe. It cares about what you do. The key is posture, and -- you guessed it -- intention. Not to mention, I think, humility. Being humble may be the most important component of all.

And one more thing...

To make dreams a reality, something more is needed by the dreamer. Some internal harmony. Intentions within and without must coincide. And there must exist a drive. I will call this force Torque (known as intrinsic motivation to psychologists). Without torque, intention is nothing. If intention is a conscious use of your will, then torque is the energy that translates into willpower.

For my intention,

I will write as well as I can, as much as I can. People will read my stories for mindfulness; I will communicate with them. In the Fall of 2009 I will, if the universe is willing, attend a writer's workshop at the University of California - Irvine, or at the University of Iowa. I will be a positive influence in the world. I will be mindful. Above all, I will try my hardest every day to reach these goals, especially watching, as my father reminds me, for signs that I'm traveling the right path.

This is what I will do, if the universe is willing for me to do it.

Benjamin Percy author photo2.jpgBenjamin Percy is the author of a novel, The Wilding (forthcoming from Graywolf in 2009), and two books of stories, Refresh, Refresh (Graywolf, 2007), and The Language of Elk (Carnegie Mellon, 2006). His fiction and nonfiction appears in Esquire, Men's Journalthe Paris Review, the Chicago Tribune, Glimmer Train, and Best American Short Stories, among other publications. His honors include the Plimpton Prize and a Pushcart Prize. He teaches in the MFA program at Iowa State.

Now Benjamin Percy
is here to answer a few questions on "Ask the Writer" about process and the writing life.

Q: Congratulations on selling your novel, The Wilding, and your short story "April 20th, 2008," which was commissioned by Esquire. Most writers aspire to be widely read, though few end up making it, and some writers I've talked to--those who have achieved some success, at least--eye critics and readers warily. How do you feel about readers and critics? Does it change the way you write?

A:  When I first began writing in earnest, I felt a heated rush at the keyboard, wanting to get a story done, wanting to shove it in an envelope, slap on the postage, send it off to journal -- or forty or maybe even fifty -- praying that it would find a readership. These were confusing times. I wrote a story every week. I had a file on my computer -- ten pages long -- that tracked submissions. In my mailbox I would receive several rejections every day, sometimes with an encouraging note scrawled upon them. These I would tape to my office door and read over and over. I wasn't discouraged. Quite the opposite. I knew I was almost there--almost over the wall and into the castle--which only increased my manic energy, making me into a kind of story factory, a production line. Naturally, when you're working at such a pace, you cannot be wholly original every time you sit down to write. So my stories grew like an inbred family, full of recycled images, metaphors, sentences, characters. I was playing around with the similar ingredients, trying to find a recipe that worked.

I am obviously no longer that person. I cannot be. My wife would leave me. My heart would explode. And my work would undoubtedly suffer. Having readers, having critics, makes you slow down. You know you can't get away with carelessness -- you can't get away with recycling an image that appeared in a previous story -- you can't get away with following the same sort of character. Because somebody is waiting on the sidelines, ready to blow their whistle. By slowing down and understanding your weaknesses and setting challenges for yourself and trying to be constantly original, your work moves into deeper waters. 

Q: How has the democratization of technology, (i.e., write a novel in MS Word, format it in Adobe InDesign, make the cover in Photoshop, and print it at Kinko's) changed writing? Every since typewriters, authors have mused over the relationship of writing to technology. What are your thoughts on the subject?

A:  I love the idea of putting a pen to paper, of rattling away at a typewriter, but my work habits are linked irrevocably to the computer. Cutting and pasting. Footnoting. Googling. Spell-checking. Using the "find" option in a larger manuscript to hop around swiftly. There is something soulless (and dispensable) about a Dell compared to a trusty old Smith-Corona, but my muse is made of circuits and ram.

Q: In your story "The Killing," reprinted in your collection Refresh, Refresh, you make a passing reference to an anthropologist who talks about New York in the late 1980s. He calls this time "The Wilding." Writers are often captivated by a diverse range of ideas, returning in their fiction to particular concepts, ideas, or characters. How does your forthcoming novel, The Wilding (Graywolf Press), relate to these concepts--if at all?

A:  I read about this -- "the wilding" of NYC -- in 2003. I tucked it away on a backshelf of my mind and knew it would come in handy some day: the idea that we are all one step away from animalism. My novel confronts this idea (with Oregon as the setting).
 
Q: A friend recently read "Refresh, Refresh" and told me how close the fathers in the story paralleled his own experience in the Air Force. I also noticed you often write about Oregon, even when you write a different story entirely, as in "The Meltdown." Some writers insist on "what you know" and some insist complete imagination is key. What are the pros and cons of each approach to writing?

A:  'Write what you know' is that age-old maxim that everybody at once endorses and revises. I suppose I'll be clever and turn it on its head: know what you write. Yes, look to your backyard, your experiences, your family and friends and enemies for inspiration -- but don't consider yourself fenced in. If you've never worked for the circus, you're certainly not forbidden to write of a trapeze artist. Just do your homework. Watch some documentaries. Read some articles. Buy a ticket to Ringling Brothers. Interview the lion tamer and the bearded lady. Learn the language -- the tools -- the customs -- the psychology -- of the trade. Know it so well you fool your audience into believing you've lived through what your characters have lived.
 
Q: Many writers, to stay solvent, are forced to teach while they write. Do you see yourself as a teacher, a writer, or as a hybrid? What would your advice be to professors and teaching assistants who harbor dreams of writing full-time?

A: I'm the hybrid-model (without the gas efficiency or leather seats). Teaching informs my writing and writing informs my teaching. The pressure of standing before a room and giving a lecture or leading a discussion forces me daily to read a student manuscript -- or a story assigned from a textbook -- with such strenuous care that I realize things I wouldn't have otherwise. These tools I carry with me to the page. And when I'm surrounded by people who care deeply about writing -- my students, my colleagues -- I feel like I'm part of a supportive, electric community (a pleasant antidote to the lonely time I spend in the chair). If I wrote exclusively, I would go a little crazy, I think, walking around in my underwear, talking to myself, rarely shaving. And I would feel guilty as well since I approach teaching as a service, a way to give back and earn my oxygen.



Tools of the Trade

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In the final chapter of his book On Becoming a Novelist, John Gardner addresses a question often asked by aspiring writers. "Do you write with a pen, a pencil, a typewriter, or what?" He says, and I agree, that the question is more important than it appears.

It calls to mind the kind of things professional gamblers are said to worry about, Gardner writes. Should one where a lucky hat? Which color of shirt is best when playing poker? And so on. It asks (without asking) if there is any hope at all for the beginning writer.

Desktop computers and blogs have made writing fast and easy. Is this a good thing? Yes and no.

Remember, just because you can write easily doesn't mean you should. Our world is fast-paced, chaotic, and always has been. But writing is not. It shouldn't be. Writing requires slow, careful concentration. This is as true for you writing e-mails in the 21st century as it was for Lev Tolstoy writing War and Peace.

I compose my stories, articles, syllabus, and  blogs on a Sony Vaio laptop computer. Usually I write in Microsoft Word 2008, and I keep the files on a titanium jump drive that, if not on my person, is usually close to me (on my desk, my bookshelf, something like that). Most people write on computers, these days, whether in the library or at home or at work.

It's important to remember (this is a friendly reminder) that writing is a process, a habit, and an act of mindfulness. It is not a physical process. Writing with a pen may be different in some ways than writing on a laptop. The important difference in the physical process, or the actual activity of writing, is a difference, too often, of quality.

Pencils and pens force us to go slowly. To think, compose in our heads, and to move forward with ideas instead of going backwards. Who wants to rewrite the first chapter of a novel 100 times in ink?

Yet computers are important. Remain mindful of computers and research venues (Google Scholar, Lexis Nexus, etc.) as tools. Only tools. A computer may help you write a novel faster, and it may even be good, but in some ways it may also harm your ability to write.

The best artists in this age of technology (and here I mean graphic designers, painters, sketch artists, photographers, and writers, too) understand the power of tools like Adobe Creative Suite and Microsoft Office, but they never forget that the programs cannot make the art for them. They still pour in the attention of Tolstoy or Picasso, and the new technology takes them in different directions. In all its complexity, this is the one element that will never, ever become digitized.
I'm finally back from Anaheim, rested (somewhat), and ready to travel again this week. I'm tired, I will admit, and the words are coming slowly. I'm working on several short stories, including one called The Destroyer, which is based on the true story of a heavily-armored train in Siberia, and The Kurdish Shepard, about a boy and his dog in modern-day Iraq.

More than that, though, I will shortly be reviewing several new books -- some haven't been released, yet, so I'm hoping to build buzz for their authors -- that I picked up at the ALA convention. Top of the list is Neil Gaiman's The Graveyard Book, a young adult novel about a boy raised by ghosts, and Dennis Lehane's The Given Day, a novel about Boston circa 1917. both are fantastic; I will review them, of course, but first I'd like to check with the editor and publicity teams to make sure that's all right.

As always, keep posted for details on new "Ask the Writer" interviews, upcoming events, and more.

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